Theme in Writing
Theme in Writing
Panel at Orycon 34 (2012) #orycon
Richard A. Lovett, Annie Bellet, Aimee C. Amodio, Wandy N. Wagner
Found Treasures: Avogadro Corp Images

I was searching my computer for a file this morning, and found a bunch of images I’d created in the course of writing and publishing Avogadro Corp. You can click on any of the images to see the original, high resolution photos.
It starts with this timeline for Avogadro Corp. I think it’s pretty cool, although the canonical date for the events in Avogadro Corp is now 2015.
I also found one of the pieces of the original cover design. We ended up abandoning this style, but you can see the subtitle “The Singularity Is Closer Than It Appears” comes from this visual:
Here’s the Avogadro corporate structure. This is somewhat inaccurate as compared to what’s in the final book. It also doesn’t quite address one of the lingering continuity errors: Gary Mitchell is the combination of two earlier characters. In the novel he is the head of both Ops and Communication Products.
This is probably my favorite image of the bunch. It’s the location of Avogadro Corp headquarters, located in Portland, Oregon. In real life, this is the site of Conway Trucking.
Prix Fixe Site Pricing
Advertisements on apps and websites drive me crazy when they detract from using a website or application.
Earlier today, for example, I was trying to use evite to send a message to invitees to a party I held last summer. The user interface is so chock full of ads that it’s actually hard to make it from screen to screen and keep track of what I’m trying to do.
Popup ads on news sites are similarly frustrating: I want to read the content, not see a completely unrelated, intrusive ad.
I’m not opposed to paying for an ad-free experience.
I love Pandora, for example, and I’m delighted to pay for an annual subscription. I get a better product, no ads, and the feeling of supporting a company I love.
At the same time, it’s not practical to pay individually for each and every site I might visit, especially ones I use only occasionally (evite, wired.com) or once. As Chris Anderson talks about in Free, the transaction cost of paying even a small amount (the cognitive load of deciding to pay plus the mechanics of paying) vastly overwhelms the financial impact of the actual price of the product.
I think the solution is bundle or prix fixe pricing for websites.
What I imagine is something like this: As a user, I pay $X per month, or maybe $8*X per year. With this payment, I get access to a very large pool of content and websites: magazine articles, newspaper articles, and services like evite. It’s not coming from just one site or one company but from many different sites from many different companies.
When I go to sites to read, I’m identified via some common login system (like the way Facebook or Twitter authentication works). I read/use whatever I want, as much as I want. While I’m doing this, the websites are keeping track of my amount of usage, based on pageviews.
At the end of the month, the amount of my subscription is divided evenly among my pageviews. If I read one article, my $X goes to that. If I’ve read 50 articles and used 20 services, each gets 1/70th of the whole. This is done for every subscriber.
The end result is that there’s no transaction cost associated with each piece of premium content (because I’ve paid in advance), and yet there’s still a flow of dollars based on actual use. It’s a win for the customer who can now choose to conveniently get an ad-free experience without worrying about individual subscriptions, and it’s a win for web businesses, because they can now monetize their content without ads.
As a build upon the core idea, I can imagine different tiers as well:
- At $10/month, I see no ads on content sites like the New York Times and occasional use services such as evite.
- At $20/month, I see no ads on frequently used sites like Facebook or Pandora.
- At $30/month, I can unlock premium, subscription only services.
This could also be a solution for the dilemma of newspapers: they could more effectively unlock revenue from customers in an age whether readers tend to read articles from everywhere.
Comments?
Answers from Cory Doctorow
Cory Doctorow, author and internet activist, held an “Ask me anything” on Reddit last week. I took the opportunity to ask him two questions, which he answered. I’m reproducing them below, but you can read the entirety of the ama on reddit.
I asked:
I understand and agree with your arguments against Trusted Computing.
I also know that with the government taking an increasing role in underwriting viruses, and the looming specter of evolutionary viruses, it seems like maintain a secure computing environment may become more and more difficult.
Is there any chance Trusted Computer could have a role to play in protecting us against a future onslaught of semi-sentient computer viruses, and if so, is it worth it?
He answered:
Yeah — I cover that in my Defcon talk:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Ogmy8XRXvo
I also asked:
Hi Cory, I love your work. How do you decide what level of technical detail to get into when you’re writing fiction? Do you get pushback from editors on the way you handle more complicated issues (e.g. what’s the right level of detail to include when discussing copyright law in Pirate Cinema), and if so, how do you handle that?
He answered:
Naw. I’ve got an AWESOME editor at Tor, Patrick Nielsen Hayden, who makes my books better. He got me to rewrite the dual-key crypto stuff in LB a couple times, but only to make it clearer, not less nerdy.
New Evidence We Live in a Computer Simulation
It’s this kind of thinking that forces physicists to consider the possibility that our entire cosmos could be running on a vastly powerful computer. If so, is there any way we could ever know?
Today, we get an answer of sorts from Silas Beane, at the University of Bonn in Germany, and a few pals. They say there is a way to see evidence that we are being simulated, at least in certain scenarios.
First, some background. The problem with all simulations is that the laws of physics, which appear continuous, have to be superimposed onto a discrete three dimensional lattice which advances in steps of time.
The question that Beane and co ask is whether the lattice spacing imposes any kind of limitation on the physical processes we see in the universe. They examine, in particular, high energy processes, which probe smaller regions of space as they get more energetic
What they find is interesting. They say that the lattice spacing imposes a fundamental limit on the energy that particles can have. That’s because nothing can exist that is smaller than the lattice itself.
So if our cosmos is merely a simulation, there ought to be a cut off in the spectrum of high energy particles.
It turns out there is exactly this kind of cut off in the energy of cosmic ray particles, a limit known as the Greisen–Zatsepin–Kuzmin or GZK cut off.
Audiobook Edition of Avogadro Corp

I’m incredibly excited that the audiobook version of Avogadro Corp is available on Audible.com!
It’s narrated by Rob Granniss of Brick Shop Audio. I’m delighted with how the book came out.
When Avogadro Corp was first published last December, it had a few typos. I released updated versions of the Kindle format, as those mistakes were uncovered and corrected.
But when I got the first audition tape for Avogadro from Rob, it was the first time I’d heard the book read out loud by something else. I quickly realized that I needed to do a lot more than just correct typos: I needed to go through the whole novel with a scouring pad, and clean out my overuse of certain words or sentence structures.
The result was a lengthy reworking of the narrative, with more than two hundred and fifty changes.
The audiobook includes the most up to date text, and the Kindle version has been re-released as well. The paperback in still in progress — print formatting is time consuming and hard — but that will be re-released in a few weeks as well.
I hope you’ll buy a copy of the audiobook for yourself or a friend, and check out the updated Kindle version as well.
Brody: Unconquered Hope Review
The notion of a ‘contained thriller’, that is a story which takes place entirely within a constrained environment, holds tremendous appeal for me because it allows the exploration of ideas, characters and settings without the distractions of the world at large. I find that the tension is further heightened because the environment is limited: Alfred Hitchcock’s Rear Window would be an entirely different movie if our protagonist could simply have gotten up out of his wheelchair and walked over to the neighbor’s apartment.
Such is the case with the novella Brody: Hope Unconquered. Erik Wecks has done a superb job of using a contained environment (a two-person spacecraft on an unstoppable/unchangeable five year journey) to create, hold, and build the tension core to the story. In a time when year-long crewed missions to Mars are under consideration, I think this is a timely exploration of just what it means to live within such an environment.
The other example of a contained environment scifi story is Hugh Howey’s Wool, which I loved and reviewed a few months ago. I found a similar enjoyment in both Wool and Brody in terms of growing to understand the universe at large as well as the limitations of their environments.
Brody has two intertwined threads: the story of the trip through space, and a backstory thread that explores how Roger and Helena came to be on the ship, and the stakes involved for them. This backstory serves to heighten the tension of the forward storyline. The integration of the two is perhaps the one weak point of the book, as I sometimes found myself confused in the backstory thread, but this didn’t interfere with my enjoyment of the book as a whole.
I enjoyed Brody: Hope Unconquered and hope you’ll check it out.
Pirate Cinema by Cory Doctorow Review
I’m a long term Cory Doctorow fan, having loved Makers, Little Brother, For the Win, and Eastern Standard Tribes.
Set in the near-term future, Pirate Cinema is a science fiction thriller about oppressive copyright laws.
In Pirate Cinema, like Little Brother, we have another young adult protagonist and his super-smart female love interest and their tribe, who become outraged at government and corporate interests and take action to improve the world.
As in other Doctorow novels, we get great, really rich settings. This one takes place in London’s street/squatter scene. It’s hard to imagine that Doctorow could write this stuff without having lived it himself. I’d love to spend six weeks with Doctorow and see what his life is really like.
In Pirate Cinema, the technology, morals, and activism take place front and center, as they do in most Doctorow novels. This is about intellectual property rights, their effect on creativity, trusted computing, DRM, and the rights of corporations versus people. In his earlier books, Cory’s prose sometimes read like an academic paper when he’s talking about the serious stuff. This is still here, but I think he’s done a much better job of blending it in. And I really don’t mind the lectures: they’re fun and educational, even for someone relatively conversant in the space.
I don’t want to give too much away, but I laughed out loud and had to immediately text a few friends when I get to the scene on panhandling A/B testing. If you know what A/B testing is, I promise this scene will crack you up.
In short, if you liked Little Brother, Makers, or For the Win, you’ll love Pirate Cinema too. If you haven’t tried any of Doctorow’s fiction, I highly recommend it. He writes about important issues in a fun and entertaining way. You can read for the fun or the lessons or both.
Note to parents: my kids are still in their single-digit ages, but when they hit their teens I hope to feed them a steady diet of Doctorow novels, including Pirate Cinema. The language, street living, and drugs might be slightly edgy, but the lessons about corporate interests and activism are right on.
Past Tenses: Simple Past, Past Perfect, and Habitual Past
One of the benefits of my writing critique group is that when I critique someone else’s work, I feel compelled to be absolutely sure about the advice I’m giving. So I’ll often do way more research into a topic when I’m giving someone else feedback.
I did a little research into past tenses for my writing critique group, and thought I’d share it here.
- would [verb] (requires a time indicator)
- used to [verb]
I kissed my mom goodbye, shrugged on my backpack, and walked outside. It was cool and crisp. I zipped up my jacket and walked to school. It took me about fifteen minutes to get there, and before I knew it, I was standing outside the school building. With trepidation, I entered.
I took my lunch out of my backpack, and unpacked the sandwich my mother had made for me. That morning, I had kissed my mom goodbye, shrugged on my backpack and walked outside. It had been cool and crisp. I had zipped up my jacket and walked to school. It had taken me about fifteen minutes to get there, and before I knew it, I had been standing outside the school building. With trepidation, I had entered.
On the first of each elementary school year, I would kiss my mom goodbye, shrug on my backpack and walk outside. It would be cool and crisp. I would zip up my jacket and walk to school. It would take me about fifteen minutes to get there, and before I knew it, I would be standing outside the school building. With trepidation, I would enter.